Quezon City Memorial Circle is located in Metro Manila, and is a twenty-five hectare piece of land where the monument for the late Manuel L. Quezon stands. Aside from being a historical landmark, it is also a park open to the public. For more information on the place, visit the local government's official website.

Tuesday, August 14, 2012

Time-out

Time-out
By: Leona Lao

Before the golden rays of sunlight even touch the mourning angels perched atop the marble monument, Quezon City Memorial Circle (QCMC) is already brimming with people from different walks of life.

            The Circle, as it is more commonly referred to, is a park and shrine for the late Manuel Quezon. Although its historical significance is not in the least underplayed, the park is more commonly recognized by locals as a haven where strangers gather to retreat from the bustling city life. To – both literally and figuratively – run away from the smoke and noise of Manila.

Renovation meets perspiration
QC Circle hasn’t always been such a popular hang-out for fitness enthusiasts.

For one, the environment wasn’t very inviting. The place was neither well-maintained nor accessible— there were disorganized clumps of trees, dirty equipment, broken gates, and undefined car entrances. Pedestrians had to brave the Elliptical Road to get there. The ignored fountain seemed to me the biggest turn-off, considering it is surrounded by radiantly orange and blue tiles that underscore its magnificence (or lack thereof).

Although QC Circle undeniably had its merits for its value as a historical landmark and as one of the few areas in Metro Manila that could boast of trees, it was not the ideal venue for physical fitness.

However, in 2007, the Quezon City government took over the maintenance of the park and spearheaded many renovations and projects. Recently, plans were even made with the end goal of making Quezon City a major tourist destination, as Nancy Carjaval’s 2010 news article in the Philippine Daily Inquirer reports.


Changing landscapes
One of the taho vendors in the Circle, brown-skinned and bearing lines on his face that echo age, dons the green uniform of QC Circle employees. He prides in working in QC Circle for the past 30 years, and when asked what the greatest change in the Circle has been over the years, he is quick to refer to Mayor Belmonte’s beautification projects.

To make the place more open to the public, two pedestrian underpasses were constructed. As Philippine Star news articles “QC Circle underpass inauguration set” and “Pedestrian underpass to the Quezon Memorial Circle” details, one underpass connects QCMC to the Philippine Coconut Authority (PhilCoA), while the other extends from Quezon City Hall. Gates were fixed to further define the entrances.

The official QC website notes that the QC Circle is usually a convergence point for some international marathons, and the construction of biking lanes has also made it easier for cyclists to train.

Aside from the upgraded playground areas, different multipurpose halls were constructed, such as Seminar Hall, Century Hall, and People's Hall. These halls may be reserved or rented to hold various events and workshops. QCMC also holds taebo and disco classes in the multipurpose halls, and, for the more adventurous, offer ziplines and go karts for a certain fee.

All these facilities and upgrades have helped to build a QC Circle that has been receiving a lot more traffic and is fast becoming popular— “Kasi marami nang bago dito (Because there are so many new things here)," a group of joggers agreed.  Since the start of the changes, QC Circle has not stopped in developing into an estimated 25-hectare area where people who practice different physical exercises can congregate.


A hodgepodge of sports
Before we even got off the car, I could already see through the window a group of cyclists. All of them were in the characteristic biker ensemble of helmet, sport shirt, cycling shorts, a good pair of shoes, a bottle of water, and, of course, a sleek bicycle. It’s worth noting that whereas before the renovations, the Circle was largely just a regular park that people frequented for leisure, today, with all its improvements, it is a favorite even of professional bikers, including those for national cycling events like the Philippine Grand Prix, as cited in the local government’s website.

Upon me and my friends’ arrival, I was immediately overwhelmed by everything simultaneously occurring. Notes of a faint, melodious singing from somewhere a little farther off, mixed together with peaceful, morning silence, served as the soundtrack for our journey through the unfamiliar terrains of the QC Circle.

Under the shade of the trees, there were people practicing arnis. The teachers demonstrated the movements, their arms precise and graceful, as the students imitated and learned. Nearby another grassy area, people were power boxing, sweat dripping down their bodies and their faces immersed in concentration. Somewhere a little farther down the road there were people playing volleyball, and what seemed to be two brothers engrossed in their informal badminton game. The fact that so many sports and exercises were condensed into one place left me in awe.

As I continued my walk, I passed by different joggers. Some, judging by jogging pants that boldly proclaimed their schools, I presumed to be students. Others, from the lines on their faces or just by the way that they carried themselves, were middle-aged, and there were even those who might pass for my grandparents.

I also chanced upon people dancing in Mabini Hall. They were being led by a middle-aged woman in red, following simple dance moves that sometimes did and sometimes did not require them to have partners. When I asked one of the bystanders, who was watching them dance in a fashion just as bemused as I was, he told me that the group had reserved the place to hold dancing lessons and have sessions certain days of the week.

The sports, the dancing, the exercise— everything was so diverse. There was something for everyone. In a grand statement of affirmation, as if people weren’t proof enough, we encountered not only dogs being walked by their owners… we even saw a dog on a bicycle!

The assortment that had creeped its way into the culture of the QC Circle left me wondering about the bigger picture: how even the places we frequent reflect some aspect of our Philippine identity. Like Filipinos, QC Circle is an eclectic mixture, and while others might find the heterogeneity chaotic, I find that it only makes the place a richer, more interesting venue.


Recapturing childhood
Some areas of the park were dedicated to playing grounds. Children ran around to play whenever the rain would temporarily cease. Predictably, there were monkey bars, slides, and swings. There were also other things, though, such as a giant, metal wheel, and even a contraption composed of four circles – a circle for each of four people to step on – that did nothing but spin. It was slightly imbalanced and felt like it would come unhinged any moment.

It felt wonderful to realize that there are still kids out there who leave the confines of their virtual worlds to actually play outside in parks and playgrounds. In an age where video games and online identities are a dominating force, the sight of these kids was refreshing to me.

Nothing beats childhood days of playing sipa, langit-lupa, or Chinese garter; no PSP, Wii, or Xbox, regardless of the rapidly developing technology in Metro Manila and in all corners of the country, could erase the thrill of dangling from a monkey bar, reaching out— swaying, precariously, almost and— yes! Making it to the other side. The triumphant smile with which a child boasts to all his playmates: I am conqueror!


Hello, stranger
While the children aforementioned might be advised to stay away from strangers (although really, in a park like this, how can one avoid it?), the people who gather in the spacious area beside the QCMC’s fountain seem to hold no apprehensions. 

In the early morning, the fountain in the middle of the QC Circle is turned on and one can marvel as the waters splash and sway. In the spacious area beside it, people of all ages were gathered and were moving to the beat of the same music, their movements coordinated through the leadership of a man dancing unreservedly in front of the crowd.

Curious, I stood for a moment watching them. The guard, who was of average height and had a chipped front tooth, said that the exercise happens every morning, and strangers gather to have a free, fun exercise together. Although when I witnessed the event it was already past eight in the morning, he says that as early as six people are already stretching and dancing together. It’s not always in that particular spot, he says, but there’s always a morning exercise happening somewhere in QCMC.

I find this communal exercise very reflective of the positive outlook with which Filipinos choose to look at life, regardless of our country’s state: to know that in the midst of the hustle and bustle of Metro Manila, where you either have to be wary of the people you pass in streets and dark alleyways or you’re too busy to even spare them a glance, strangers still find that they can spend and enjoy time with people they barely know— and show off some pretty good dance moves while they’re at it, too.


An oasis
My last memory of QC Circle involves a girl. Probably no older than seventeen, she was dressed in simple, comfortable clothes, and she wore earphones and a carefree smile as she rode her bicycle. She must have passed me a dozen times. The stalls, the fountain, the trees, the waiting shed, the easy slope of the road… she rode in circles, the same predictable path, went past the same scenery over and over. And yet she seemed like the happiest person there.

I suppose it is not that Q.C. Circle is the most beautiful park in the world, although it’s definitely changed appreciably since 2007.  There’s just a certain muted happiness that comes with knowing that there is a place here in the midst of this busy city which still appreciates the value of taking time off to take care of one’s wellness, to wear a smile and drown in sweat, in the company of other people who’re striving for the same things.

Perhaps that is all that matters. After all, athlete or not, we all need time-out.

16 comments:

Bob Gavino said...

I like how you were able to write about the QC Circle really well - the details were straightforward and vivid with the way they were written.

In my opinion, you showcased the area best when you compared it to how it was before the renovation and much after it was "commercialized," giving the readers a sense of progress and growth when it comes to the community within the QC Circle. It sort of presented the idea that the place is more significant than what most of us would think (like maybe "just another park") and instead, how it's sort of an explicit image of the progress in the community, and ultimately how the Philippines changes.

It was also great how you were able to make the reader feel as if he were just strolling along the park. The descriptions of the people in the park, the short statements from the visitors, it's as if we were engaging in quick, casual conversations with the people interviewed.

In my opinion, you were able to feature the QC Circle, something historic and in a sense, "old," in a new perspective. And that, for me, is what makes your article effective. :D

Carlo Serdanco said...

After I read the first few paragraphs, I couldn't stop reading until i reached the end. :) I like how you described the place and I like the pictures :D. The article and the pictures helped me imagine myself walking in QC Circle. I've never been to that place before. I didn't even know it was a park. ha ha I thought it was just a circular piece of land that cars go around :))

Lyn Higwit said...

I really appreciate the pictures 'cause I've never been there, so it helps me visualise the area. :))

A few sentences lack some articles ("we all need time-out") and the tense is sometimes inconsistent (I noticed you started with past, but some were in present), but the overall grammar is good. :)

I'm not sure if it's intended, but I saw "Q.C. Circle" at the end of the piece (because throughout the article you say "QC Circle").

I like the way you wrote the first two paragraphs: I like how you used imagery (the first sentence) along with facts about the place to make it more interesting.

The transition from one idea to another is very smooth, and the sub-titles (titles of the "chunks") are very creative yet relevant——they don't 'beat around the bush', but they maintain the interesting vibe.

I also like the comparison & contrast between the "old QCMC" and "new QCMC" because it made the time that has passed all the more real——almost tangible. The article felt like a tour of QCMC.

Perhaps my favourite paragraph of all is the 2nd-to-the-last because it was the paragraph that was most like a story's beginning.

jerigvr said...
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jerigvr said...

This is very well-written piece.

From the very first sentence, my interest was already piqued.

The way you have described the QC Memorial Circle was very detailed, but not in a way that it became over the top. You used words which are simple, but I think that it helps the essay become more effective because the QC Circle is ideal for everyone. (I hope you get what I mean, I don't really know how to explain myself well)

Overall, I like it, not only because your words captured the atmosphere of the QC Circle, but also delivered it to the reader. The essay managed to not only make me, as a reader, visualize the place, but it also made me feel that I am there - or at least, want to go to QC Circle. :)

Reina Adriano said...

The tone of the whole piece is really subtle, perfect for the idea of a "timeout". It also gives interesting facts like the meaning of PhilCoA, and describes QCMC in every detail possible. The sectioning of every paragraph is appropriate for the reader to study the whole writing thoroughly.

All in all, the work done by the author has indeed captured the sight of readers.

Anonymous said...

I like how the tone of the whole article is so sincere. It was very visual, as I felt like I was moving along with the author throughout the park, and seeing the sights as she saw them. She was very effective in showing her perspective. It was really a very good read, and made me want to visit this place again for after such a long time. :)

Jaren Rex said...

Although there are a couple of errors in subject-verb agreement in the section Changing Landscapes (articles...details, QCMC...offer), this is a beautifully written article. The pictures and the descriptions make the reader feel like he is actually walking inside QCMC, exploring the areas and marveling at the sights. The article is also a nice reflection on Filipino life, particularly the way Filipinos like to spend their time.

Overall, this is a nice, informative article. It serves as an excellent advertisement of QCMC, as it describes everything that goes on there. A must-read.

Erika Cerezo said...

I love how you play with words to give such vivid descriptions. You easily took my interest with your introductory paragraphs. The way you managed to bring life to a place most people perceive to be so ordinary is commendable. What I liked best about this article is that you were able to maintain my interest until the very last word. It's a bit lengthy and long reads tend to bore a reader; however your article did not put me off one bit. It is probably due to your descriptions and how they made it easier for readers to visualize and understand your perspective. Your insights on the correlation of Q.C. Circle and our Filipino culture, helped to show how the seemingly ordinary things say so much about ourselves as a people and a nation.

It was a very good article but it was not perfect. There were small grammatical errors here and there. I think you should work on captioning a bit. They are nice captions but somehow some of them seem off to me (but maybe that's just me and my weird taste).

I'd give this article a rating of 9 out of 10.

Jose Alfonso Salas said...

First of all, the comparison of the QCMC to Filipinos was very clever.

I like how your writing style is quite visual. You paint a very crisp and vivid picture of QCMC. The way you write is similar to those in brochures, but less exaggerated, and more believable. Real nice. :D

Joem Mendoza said...

This article was straight to the point in a way that it is not too brief. It presented all the details ,at least as far as I can see it, about QMC. It navigates clearly on how QMC becomes a part of the way of life of the people. It offered a clear view of what QMC looks like in a sense that not pertaining to its physical significance but that of its association with the people.

I believe that this really is a must-read!
Compact and entertaining!
Good day!

Unknown said...

It felt as if I were taking a stroll in the park myself! I never would have imagined so many people there, let alone the way it looked in the past.

It's awesome how you showed how time really lets things change, and how aesthetics are a key ingredient to attracting attention.

It's hard not to get my interest piqued as I read this article, as its vivid descriptions help me visualize the surrounding very well; the pictures were a big load of help, too!

Good job! :D

Unknown said...

I have always wanted to go through those underpasses. I myself actually crossed the elliptical road with two of my friends already. 'Twas one of the most frightening moments of my life.

I had no idea there were activities that can be done there other than the regular park exercises; I almost did not believe you when you said there is a zip line inside. And those exercise machines... I have seen them in other parks, and they are indeed confusing. If only they had small instructional pictures or something for those that want to use it.

I really like your diction. Your descriptions really help the readers feel like they were there with you. Though it would've been nice if you took a picture of the fountain. (unless it was actually posted and I just did not realize it was a fountain) And also, that dance exercise... possibly zumba? aerobics, maybe? I want to attend a public class like that. Seems like fun. :)

Thank you for pointing out the Circle's relevance in our society. I have realized now that the Circle is not just another big area that creates traffic and accidents because of its shape for those driving outside of it; you've brought me inside the Circle and made me appreciate its use. :)

Juancho Escoto said...

I liked the way you described QCMC, it felt like I was reading a Suzanne Collins book. :D The pictures and the descriptions made me feel like I was the one taking the stroll around the place. I liked how you compared it to itself back in 2007, it showed how significantly the place has developed.

Reading this was worth my time.

Raphael Reventar said...

After reading your article, I can only imagine how many hours were spent researching on the history of QCMC from its construction up to the present day. Having the courage to interview some of the locals who actually were there from past to present was a great idea to get a first hand testimony of the place from someone who can show a great deal of contrast which you cannot get from an internet website. It shows your preparedness for writing this article since most of the segments were put into a logical order.

Your diction is well above average which created a very articulate description of the place you ventured. To be honest, if I ever did go to QCMC I would probably be just disappointed with the place since I have a gut feeling that the way you illustrated it in your article will be far better than actually going there. The way you formed you described the ongoing events happening there make the place seem enticing to go to(more than it actually is I'd reckon). I am not sure whether or not that is a bad thing, I'll leave that up to you.

One thing that I don't find often in articles such as this is the intellectual honesty to say things for what they are. This article however, proves to me that there are still people in the world who have no fear to say what they truly feel about a certain area. The way you described QCMC's lackluster in the beginning is something other writers would have omitted. Although I do not agree with your affirmation that games consequent from technological advancements cannot compare to traditional Filipino games, I still find it nice to see a different opinions(or maybe I am just overly biased).

I am not being saccharine when I say that the article is elegant, easy to comprehend and upfront. You actually made a seemingly boring topic to me something worth reading. Great work. :)

Unknown said...

Wow, reading this article was entertaining, aside from being very informative. As I was reading it, I felt like I was transported to the place you were talking about because of the vivid and colorful descriptions that were used. Frankly, I've never been there before, but despite that unfortunate circumstance, I was still able to imagine the park fairly well, thanks to your writing skills.

What struck me the most is the part where it says: "The assortment that had creeped its way into the culture of the QC Circle left me wondering about the bigger picture: how even the places we frequent reflect some aspect of our Philippine identity. Like Filipinos, QC Circle is an eclectic mixture, and while others might find the heterogeneity chaotic, I find that it only makes the place a richer, more interesting venue."

I like how you found a deeper meaning to such a simple and barely noticed place (in my opinion, that is).

Actually, I wasn't really interested with the topic, at first. However, you were able to sway me and capture my interest through your article. And that is the essence of a feature article: to capture the interest of your readers, to entertain, and to inform. I really enjoyed reading your work!

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